Friday, September 23, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday # 1

Ok, don't laugh!! I've try something new. I'm no writer, so please be indulgent. I thought it was funny to do something writers seem enjoying doing. I'm not comparing to them, I just had a lot of fun trying to write 100 words for this pic. Hope you'll like it




You growl at me. I can tell you’re not happy with me at all. Well, that’s too bad, because I’m planning to have you here for some times. You thought I was weak, defenseless, and too much in love with you to take my revenge. All wrong Mister. I’m going to make you pay for your careless behavior. I’m going to lick your body from head to toes and watch you squirm. I’ll take you in my mouth and hear you moan. And I’ll enjoy it! Oh, did I forget to tell you that you’ll be wearing a cock ring?
Here are the links to some writers who did the Flash Fiction Friday
Havan Fellows: http://havanshawthaven.blogspot.com/
Lee Brazil : http://leebrazilauthor.blogspot.com/
Benjamin Russell : www.incubuschronicles.blogspot.com

13 comments:

  1. Jade, you don't give yourself enough credit, this is very good. I love the spin of the Sub turning the tables on the Master. I really liked the part about the licking from head to toes and the cock-ring. Hmmmm, sounds tasty.

    This is very well done and I'm going to share it with my FFF friends. I'm sure they'll all agree that you should seriously consider joining our merry band of misfits and deviants.

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  2. Excellent FFF post! You should join us every week. I'd enjoy him too.

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  3. Oh honey this was very very good! I love it! You should definitely join every week!

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  4. LOL Awesome! Sounds like one hell of a time! Well done!

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  5. I'm sorry, did you say you aren't a writer? I beg to differ honey, that was amazing!! Great Job!!!

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  6. Allo Mon ange! Please join us! You are really very good and 100 words is pretty much nothing honey!

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  7. I loved this. Very good. Poor guy is going to have one hell of a...well let's just say something will be blue.

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  8. oh, I love it Jade! so much emotion!

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  9. I thought this very good. Very respectable first FFF:) xo

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  10. Okay - it wouldn't let me comment at work this morning - so maybe it will now ...

    Remind me never to piss you off Jade ... or maybe you should remind me to piss you off ... *winks*

    This is terrific my yin! :D

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