Thursday, November 10, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday # 6

Welcome to another Flash Fiction Friday! If you don't know what FFF is (and that's a shame) here is the definition: Find a hundred words, no more, no less, to illustrate a pic chosen by one of the member of the FFF group (and today pic was chosen by my yang Havan Fellows). So don't forget to stop by my fellows FFF writers and read their story. Here's the link: Flash Fiction Friday Group. Or you'll find the list of the writers participating this week at the end of this post.
And now, for your enjoyment (well, a woman can hope right?)




« I told you we will come to that, but you wouldn’t listen to me… Now you have to pay for your disobedience!”
Jason felt a shiver running down his spine as Malcolm's arms encircled him. He was so waiting for his punishment. He knew Malcolm would be upset by his actions, and he did it on purpose. Malcolm was reluctant to dominate him and Jason found out that acting like a stubborn child always brought back the Dom out of his partner.
He leaned against Malcolm, relaxed, a smile playing on his lips.
“I’m ready for my punishment, Master”








19 comments:

  1. Oh yes! But I need to know about the punishment

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  2. That was great! I loved the BD/SM angle.

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  3. Oh yea!! Loved that! Hm, What is the punishment? I'm with Naomi.

    Erika

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  4. Hot! So very hot! Great FFF!

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  5. Very nice and demented. What a stubborn brat!

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  6. I love bratty subs! Awesome post Jade!

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  7. Ooo, a little dominating. Good stuff!

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  8. Oh yeah! The delicious things his master could do to him. Yummy post.

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  9. I love a sub who teases! Great post Jade you naughty naughty girl.

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  10. Naughty, naughty....did you get a video of his punishment? I'd like a copy. You know, for research.

    GREAT JOB!!

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  11. Yes, unfortunately some subs have to push their repressed Doms into action. ;)

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  12. Jade, you are just growing leaps and bounds with every FFF post. You have a fertile imagination and you're creating wonderful story lines with these pictures. F'ing GREAT.

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  13. Sounds like he's going to get just what he wants!

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  14. Oh ... love that sub - he knows how to get what he wants! hehe

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  15. Wow, I love a man who knows how to get what he wants. Fantastic FFF!

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  16. Who says Doms are actually in control, the subs are very powerful indeed and your post depicts that well. Nice FFF

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