Friday, October 21, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday # 5

Hi everybody..This week, I had a lot of fun writing this FFF.. I just hope you'll have fun too reading it. Without further delay, here is my story, where you'll find out that men are sooooo vain sometimes....




Why the satisfied look on your face? And you even think that it's worth smoking... Well, I have news for you mister; I'm still waiting for the big wave to reach the shore. Your preliminaries suck, if I can say so, and not in a good way! And I’m not talking about the act… Were you in hurry or something? Last time I checked, we had all night… You looked so promising! I guess my mom was right when she said not to judge a book by its cover. Your pretty face doesn’t match your ability to please a woman! 



Don't forget to read the stories of the other members of the FFF. You'll find the links to their blog just under this.


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  1. Sherri HayesOctober 21, 2011 at 4:34 AM

    Love the sarcasm! lol

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  2. UnknownOctober 21, 2011 at 4:54 AM

    Love it! She needs to find a real man!

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  3. Bonni S.October 21, 2011 at 6:08 AM

    She should have listened to her mother. How many times have we all heard that? Loved it.

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  4. Benjamin T. RussellOctober 21, 2011 at 7:04 AM

    Hey, he was just taking a short smoke break to recoup before round two - love is better the second time around. Besides, he told her to stop moving her hips like a belly dancer. Very Good Ms. Jade, I like your style.

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  5. Lee BrazilOctober 21, 2011 at 7:43 AM

    rofl! this poor guy is getting a bad reputation!

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  6. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 7:47 AM

    Wow, another man who cannot satisfy his woman! What a cryin shame. Nice take Jade!

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  7. Katie HarperOctober 21, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    We should have a Facebook page. DON'T SLEEP WITH THIS GUY. He can be our profile pic. *Evil thoughts cross through my brain*

    GREAT JOB!!

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  8. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    I love that this flash is all her POV. Great job!

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  9. VenusBookluvrOctober 21, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    Thanks for the wonderful giggle!! Great FFF.

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  10. Author Cyril J. MichaelOctober 21, 2011 at 4:43 PM

    I'm glad I don't have to live up to her expectations. Nice Job!

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  11. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 6:16 PM

    Thanks for the laugh. For some reason Missy Elliot's One Minute Man has been going through my head every post I read :giggles:

    Erika

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  12. HavanOctober 21, 2011 at 8:46 PM

    Ooooh ... looks won't get you to the finish line mister ... you have to work it too! roflmao ... my yin this is terrific! <3

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